WATERFALLS
The sound of water
Makes me think of waterfalls
Gushing and splashing
by Celine Goh yun yi, Singapore
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wow that was a good poem.that made me feel
ReplyDeletelike I was there at that time and made hear
the waves crash.
from Ella
I really loved that poem because it's descibing the waterfalls. The good thing is that you can't hear it but it makes a mind picture and it the water kind of lookslike they the poem discribed it.
ReplyDeleteFrom: Lisa
It makes me feel cold and in the moment it is a good poem
ReplyDeleteit makes me think about water falls just thinking about it especially when it said gushing and splashing
ReplyDeletebrie
I think it feels like being in the jungle
ReplyDeleteI really like that poem because it makes me think of musical tones of tinny water drops hitting a pool of water.
ReplyDeletefrom britany w
IT'S PEACEFUL AND HAS GOOD ADJECTIVES SO WELLDONE
ReplyDeleteWHAT DOES IT MAKE ME FEEL?
ReplyDeleteIt makes me feel warm and happy ,calm inside.It also makes ne feel like water with white foam falling off a giant cliff
WHY?
Becausethe words GSHING and SPLASHING makes a picture in my mind of me as water.
BY:Deu Brink
ROOM:6
WEEK:1
DATE:THURSDAY THE 23 OF JULY
it makes me feel really calm and it can make a picture in my mind you can hear the water the water splashing in your ear it soothes me because it is something you can remember easily it has the right words describing the water gushing. my picture is beside the river with a huge water fall gazing down on you it is very short to but you can easily rememember it
ReplyDeleteBeth
I really liked that poem it painted a picture in my mind.Its like I can already hear the sound of water splashing.
ReplyDeleteFrom:India
I did not like it because it was not
ReplyDeleteinteresting
from|Eric
I kind of liked it but it did"nt hook me in to what I was reading but maby other people mite like it by:sam b
ReplyDeleteI did not really like this poem. It was boring but peacful. I do not think water sounds like a waterfall by callum
ReplyDeletei think that it makes me feel like i am right next to a waterfall because it says that the gushing and splashing.
ReplyDeleteJohn Ross
I liked the poem because it painted a picture in my mind.I can hear the water falling down.It feels calm and peaceful inside.I can see waves crashing gushing and splashing.
ReplyDeleteFrom Josephine